To my EX G F

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My sweetheart… Dear, do you remember?
The sweep of love’s dimension?
Of how we sought each other, so
We scarce could bear the tension.

We’d search among the crowded ways
With eager, burning, questing
Until the sight, the words, the kiss
Would still our world to resting.

The time together we would spend
Flew swift as swallows fleeing
But once alone, the hours dragged by
Monotonous, dead, unseeing.

Anew, our greetings joyous glee
Brought comfort, strength and passion
Our love renewed with boundless depths
Enthralled us in its fashion.

And when we parted, ere the dawn
With promised love’s bright sorrow
The nights were never long enough
We swore to stretch the morrow.

But then, tomorrow never comes
I lie here, bereft and grieving
With just the ashes of our love
Cold comfort, born of grieving.


5 thoughts on “To my EX G F

    अविनाशी said:
    December 9, 2006 at 10:53 am

    To be or not to be……..
    In love or out of love….
    When heart burns into cinders………….
    when dream falls into pieces….
    When love acts opposite…………
    Thr is no way out………
    And we compose poems for our old flames…..

    utshab said:
    December 10, 2006 at 3:50 pm

    yes, u r right avi. writing poems or such creative things is difficult at other times but at such tragedic periods our hands itself goes for writing and mind itself goes for creating such things. it is like fast reliev medichines too. we can pour our feelings on it which is difficult to express to someone else.

    vahsek said:
    February 7, 2007 at 11:06 pm

    just read it.
    avi you are lost yaar!

    Pracas Upreti said:
    March 13, 2007 at 12:25 pm

    hello utsab , k chhaa yaar , malai ta timro blog heryo ki yaha nai aauna maan lagchha , asti lekheko mero comments hide gareko ho ki kya ho yaar ,

    la la , ani aru k chha , ye sachi , maile ujwal lai yaha dubai aayako next day nai bhete , sarai khusi lagyo , all credits goes to u , timi le phone no diyera nai maile bhetne mauka paye ,

    la la yaar , timro blog ko dherai dherai unnati hos , bye , mail garne time bhaya bhane malai blank message garda hunchha , ani ma reply garaula hai , la missing u friend , bye

    Utshab Pokhrel said:
    March 13, 2007 at 2:43 pm

    Hi Pracas,

    Timro comment hide gareko haina. Timile “my profile” ma comment gareko rahechha. Tyaha chha, hera hai.

    Thanks for ur wish towards my blog yar and i wish that not only of mine and urs but also of all nepali bloggers’……………..

    miss u, too.

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